کسی نے یہ بقراط سے جا کے پوچھا
مرض تیرے نزدیک مہلک ہیں کیا کیا
kisii ne ye buqraat se jaa ke puuchhaa
maraz tere nazdiik muhlik haiñ kyaa kyaa
Someone went and asked Hippocrates:
'In your view, which diseases are deadly?'
الطاف حسین حالی
A pupil of Ghalib and his first biographer (Yadgar-e-Ghalib), Hali also wrote the first work of Urdu literary criticism, Muqaddama-e-Sher-o-Shairi. His Musaddas (1879) called his community to self-renewal.
Hali wants to be understood. Notice the plain syntax, the absence of ornament for its own sake, and the use of the six-line musaddas stanza for argument.